Merge pull request #37 from gazayas/english-fixes

英文の添削

Author: unasuke

en/index.md

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 title: ruby-jp.slack.com
-description: ruby-jp is a Slack workspace created with the intention of fostering interactions between Ruby programmers. Regardless of technical proficiency, we aim to provide a space where questions, consultations, and information exchange can be carried out with ease.
+description: ruby-jp is a Slack workspace created for the purpose of fostering interaction between Ruby programmers. We aim to provide a space where people can ask questions, get advice, and exchange information with ease regardless of skill level. 
 lang: en
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-**ruby-jp is a Slack workspace created with the intention of fostering interactions between Ruby programmers.**
+**ruby-jp is a Slack workspace created for the purpose of fostering interaction between Ruby programmers.**
 
-Regardless of technical proficiency, we aim to provide a space where questions, consultations, and information exchange can be carried out with ease.
+We aim to provide a space where people can ask questions, get advice, and exchange information with ease regardless of skill level.
 
-**We warmly welcome beginners and students** like studying Ruby. No professional experiences required!
+**We warmly welcome beginners and students** who are studying Ruby. No professional experience is required!
 
 If you are studying and want advice from experienced members, or if you're having trouble with anything, don't hesitate to ask us anytime.
 
-Please make sure to read the following [Code of Conduct](#code-of-conduct) before joining in.
+Please make sure to read the following [Code of Conduct](#code-of-conduct) before joining.
 
-ruby-jp is committed to providing a space where Ruby programmers, including learners of course, can communicate with each other beyond generations and corporate boundaries.
+ruby-jp is committed to providing a space where Ruby programmers, including learners, can communicate with each other regardless of age or corporate boundaries.
 
 
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@@ -25,8 +25,8 @@ ruby-jp is committed to providing a space where Ruby programmers, including lear
 {: #code-of-conduct }
 
 - If you have experience in coding, please be kind and patient with beginners and learners.
-- Even if the discussion becomes heated, avoid insulting or hurting others.
-- Let's create an environment where everyone can interact comfortably, regardless of gender, sexual orientation, disabilities, race, or religion.
+- Avoid insulting or hurting others when discussing.
+- Please help to create an environment where everyone can interact comfortably, regardless of gender, sexual orientation, disability, race, or religion.
 - Avoid making comments that show disregard for others, including software developers.
 - Please note that if any of the above behaviors are confirmed, your account may be suspended.
 
@@ -35,13 +35,13 @@ ruby-jp is committed to providing a space where Ruby programmers, including lear
 ## 💎 ruby-jp usage
 {: #usage }
 
-- ruby-jp is a place where questions, discussions, and information exchanges can be held, regardless of participants' technical levels.
-- No need to read all past logs to post new topices.
+- ruby-jp is a place where people can ask questions, have discussions, and exchange information regardless of one's skill level.
+- There is no need to read all past logs to post new topics.
 - Feel free to create channels and add emojis. No permission is required.
-- Emojis that are inappropriate in terms of copyright or likely to offend others may be removed.
-- Channels that have not been used for a certain period may be archived without notice. If you'd like them back, feel free to do so.
-- Past logs will become unviewable after a few months from posted.
-- Given the amount of information, please subscribe to channels of your interest and enjoy at your own pace.
+- Emojis that go against copyright laws or emojis that are likely to offend others may be removed.
+- Channels that have not been used for a certain amount of time may be archived without notice. If you'd like them back, feel free to add them again.
+- Past logs will disappear a few months after they were posted.
+- Given the amount of information, please subscribe to channels you are interested in and participate in them as you please.
 - Those who enjoy programming as a hobby or who want to study Ruby in different industries are also very welcome.
 
 
@@ -50,12 +50,12 @@ ruby-jp is committed to providing a space where Ruby programmers, including lear
 
 - We have various channels, but we recommend `#newbie` for beginners and `#students` for student-oriented discussions.
 - Questions about Ruby on Rails and databases are also very welcome.
-- If you encounter any points of confusion in online programming courses or textbooks, or have questions about how to learn, feel free to ask anything.
-- If you're not sure which channel to ask your question in, start with `#newbie` or `#support` channels. Many people are watching, and if there's a more suitable channel, someone will provide a link.
+- If you ever get confused about information you find in online programming courses or textbooks, or if have questions about how to learn, feel free to ask anything.
+- If you're not sure which channel to ask your question in, start with the `#newbie` or `#support` channels. Many people check these channels, and if there's one that is more suitable, someone will provide a link to it.
 
 
 ## 🙌 Self-introduction
 {: #self-introduction }
 
-- **Let's introduce yourself** in the `#general` channel after joining!
+- **Introduce yourself** in the `#general` channel after joining!
 - **Set a profile picture.** It makes it easier for others to remember you.